I have read all 64 pages, and actually laughed out loud. After the first page that’s quite an achievement.

For anyone coming after me: just read the last chapter. It’s actually decent.

This “novel” is excellent exihibit of how humans can improve in their skill. From worst writing I have ever read to better than some published novels I had unpleastness of reading. Keep going as you will go places. Your skill has improved so much that it actually is a shame how bad the chapter 0 is.

In your place I would probably start over, and take a look how to structure a plot with twists and turns. Come up with a hook and first sentence of a book. As they say, that is most important sentence.

I love how sassy the catgirl is.

At least on scribble hub you mostly edit spelling and grammar mistakes. Not major plot points.

I have seen a re-write of the whole book, and the old version marked as draft.

The appreciating comments will come on those platforms, so your motivation will be fuelled.

I love how this anime opened, with a scene at the destination. This is a journey of hope and I love it. (I will need a good supply of tissues tho)

Yeah, but if we count the all of Endless Eight as one episode split into eight broadcasts then it’s 24min*8=192min.

By carefully stretching the definition of an episode we could argue that Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya S2E1 has runtime of over 3 hours.

self fulfilling prophecy with that goddess revelation

Yes

lol

trace.moe points to giantama S2 E41-50

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<Heroine? Saint? No, I’m an All-Works Maid (and Proud of It)!> vol 4 - a filler that connects the arcs. Not much of plot developement, but at least we got introduced to a new major character. Comedy of error is still going, it went a bit stale. I just hope it will implode soon. The short story I have already read in manga, but I didn’t realise.

I think I have kind of moved on/[grew out of(?)] from light novels. Thanks a bunch for hanging out here in this community for the past years. If I pick up a light novel again I will post my thoughts here. Take care and don’t stop reading.

collector is the man of therequired sature to open that gate.

Sonny Boy!

it’s even in a video form: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p2M8Y0z9Rl0

Hilarious! What a great art and sense of motion.

Just read the whole thing and the proposal% speedrun was quite fast.

Also I hope that the protagonist will meet her twin sister someday.

I wonder how the protaginst will break the news to the village?

Will they call him out as a drunkard or will he be marked as heretic?

Epsilon no! That’s the second time you died!

the demon core for neutron source is funny

😭😭😭

Still I didn’t see this posted before in the community.